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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 08:28 AM
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Marmalade
Joined: Dec 19, 2007
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Location: deep down in my own world
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Okay. Silvia (WeAreOne) and I decided to write a story together. Im not gonna tell you what its gonna be about, you have to read it yourself 
The first part Im posting here was done by Silvia, Ill do the next one... but first, enjoy Silvias first chapter of the Rainy Day story...
RAINY DAY
"Damnit couldn't it stop raining, just for tonight?", thought Serj, trying to see beyond the thick curtain of rain. The windshield wiper of his old pick-up was finally croaking, right in the middle of the Flood, and he found himself forced to drive sticking his long pointed nose to the windshield, half blinded by the headlights reflecting on raindrops.
"Stupid me, it's raining cat and dogs since 10 days now, I could have spent the whole day dozing in bed and buy the weed another time" he thought again, this time loudly. It was almost impossible to see anything, and the traffic had thus slowed down to a walkin pace. Serj noticed a tall figure standing under an umbrella on the edge of the sidewalk. A ho, probably - who else would stand out there with such a weather? A second look revealed him that it was a man, a black man in women's clothes. Serj stroked his beard repeatedly - he had often wondered what it was like to be a woman, or a gay man, or...anything but an Armenian het male. He was very proud of his masculinity (as well as of his descent) - he'd never felt attracted by another guy, not even in the locker room of the college, where they were more than half-naked and sweaty after playing basketball. And at gigs, where there were plenty of sweaty boys, he only had eyes for the girls, sweaty or not. Yet his most intense hard-ons occurred when he watched S/M and bondage gay porn movies, fancying himself in the submissive role.
A shadow cut across the street - he saw it with the corner of his eye, but he was so absorbed in his thoughts that the information didn't make it to his brain in time.
THUMP! Serj slammed on the brakes and flung himself out of the car. A young boy, aged 16 probably, sat in the middle of the road, holding his head with both hands, groaning. Serj quickly dragged him on to the sidewalk, mumbling "I'm sorry, I'm so sorry, I couldn't see him!" Hopefully he's only got a few bruises. Once in safety, he took a closer look at the boy, who look pretty small and thin, with short prickly yellow hair that made him look like a chick - his clothes (black jeans and a black Slayer t-shirt) were dripping wet. Serj squatted before him, put a hand on the boy's shoulder and said "Hey dude, are you OK? I'm really sorry, I didn't see you at all - I'm going to call an ambulance now, and will wait here till it arrives.” The boy sat still, looking at the ground. Then he raised his head and looked him into his eyes. Serj's heart missed a few beats - the boy had huge brown eyes, made even bigger by the eyeliner, eyes that seemed to reflect all the world's good and bad. Eyes that you would like to lose yourself into, he thought. The boy smiled shyly and said "Don't want no ambulance - just take me away from here".
Serj hesitated. He kept staring at the thin blood trickle dripping from the boy's nose. "Please", begged the teenager. He looked like a wet puppy dog, and Serj was tempted to pat him on the head. Instead, he handed the boy his handkerchief and said "OK, get in". He helped him to get up and pulled him to the pick-up. Switching the engine on, he said "I'll drive you home if you tell me where you live" "Why don't you take me to your place instead? I'll blow you for free if you let me stay for the night!" Serj remained speechless. "You...you're a hooker, aren't you?" he managed to say after clearing his throat a couple of times. "Congratz mister! You won a bunny!" mocked the boy. Serj's mind started freaking out - broken wiper + underage male prostitute + half a pound of weed = end of a brilliant career, of all his dreams, countless years in jail, daily rape...
The boy laughed, a half silly half maniacal laughter. "Cool down, dude! You should've seen your face, you're so funny! I'm of age! Look!" He took a driving license out of his pocket and shoved it under Serj's nose. "I can't read, I'm driving!" He recited: "Daron V. Malakian, blah blah, born on 7/18/1975 in Los Angeles, California, USA. See? Your ass is safe, man!" "Malakian? Are you Armenian?" "Yeah, my dad comes from Iraq, but I was born here" "I'm Armenian, too! My name's Serj, Serj Tankian. I was born in Beirut, though - came here when the civil war started." "I thought you looked like an Arab terrorist in fact!" "Aw, fuck you...Daron, right? I'm tired of being called a towelhead since I grew my beard!" "Then why did you grow it?" "I don't like my face without it. I look like Cyrano de Bergerac" "Who?" "Oh, nevermind", sighed Serj.
After a while Daron started gain. "What do you do in your life, Serj Tankian?" "I work as a programmer." "Games?" "No, accounting software - I've got relatives who are in the jewellery business, so...but I'm also a musician and...erm...I write. Poems." He hoped Daron couldn't see him blushing. "What do you play?" asked Daron, suddenly excited. "Keyboards - why?" "I'm a guitarist", said the boy proudly, "I sing and play drums, too. And I write my own songs. I've got my own band. We want to be the most exciting crazy bunch of motherfuckers in town!" "Sounds like you pretty know what you're aiming at." "Yessir. One day I'll become rich and famous. I know I can make it." "So why do you *cough* ehm *cough* sell yourself?"
"What do you think you're doing instead? We're all prostitutes, old man! (Serj looked daggers at him) Look, the only things I'm good at are playing guitar, writing songs, and fucking. Unfortunately, people are more willing to pay for my pretty ass than for my music. But one day I'll have them all waving at me and scream for my name" "Aren't you afraid of being beaten or worse?" He searched into his pocket, taking out a knife this time, and showed it to Serj "I can defend myself. Do me wrong and you're dead. I mean it.", he said scowling. Serj glanced at him nervously. Daron was definitely a very strange guy. One moment he'd look vulnerable like a child, the other he could act like a consummate whore. And those eyes...they were awesome. Gazelle's eyes. Yet he could see danger in them. And I'm but a fool for this kind of danger, he thought. Daron seemed to read his thoughts, because he smiled naughtily and asked: "Have you ever thought about being blown by another guy, Serj?" Serj blushed violently. Daron drew closer to him, his hand stroking Serj's thigh. His smile widened, turning into a
wicked grin. He whispered: "Have you ever thought about giving ME a blowjob, Serj?"
... watch out, theres more to come  |
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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 09:52 AM
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Dart
Joined: Feb 26, 2007
Posts: 1003
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hehe great start from Silvia, like the description of the scene at the beginning.
I look forward to your part Silke.  |
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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 10:25 AM
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Cigaro
Joined: Oct 04, 2007
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Location: Europe for 13 months still, ie over 5000 miles from Hollywood
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Daron has amazing eyes... 
question: why it's always about blowing, gays or prostitutes  |
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Look at his face and walk ca. 8 feet away
See what happened to her face?
World as we know is collapsing.
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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 08:56 PM
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ddevil
Joined: Jul 24, 2007
Posts: 1351
Location: Stowing away in Daron's spaceship with a box of Oreos and water.
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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 09:10 PM
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Dart
Joined: Jan 31, 2008
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Finally I get around to reply to this.
You had me by the end of the first paragraph. 
I like that it is a different setting than the usual band setup, curious to see where this is headed.
Yay for more slash! And especially blowjobs
Gutter, here I come. |
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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 09:11 PM
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Spider
Joined: Apr 23, 2008
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Awean wrote:
question: why it's always about blowing, gays or prostitutes
Because that's what life's about, yo.
Silke, you already know how excited I am for your part, so there's no need to describe it here. Great job on the beginning, Silvia. |
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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 09:26 PM
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Dart
Joined: Dec 08, 2007
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Thank you.
Excuse my ignorance, but what does "AU" means? *hides away blushing* |
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Thanx Elyyyyy!
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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 09:42 PM
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ddevil
Joined: Jul 24, 2007
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Location: Stowing away in Daron's spaceship with a box of Oreos and water.
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| AU means Alternate Universe in fanfiction I typically hate AUs, but if it's written nicely like this one, I can stand them. |
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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 09:56 PM
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Dart
Joined: Dec 08, 2007
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| OK, got it. But, isn't fanfiction an AU itself? Otherwise, where's the fiction? |
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Thanx Elyyyyy!
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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 10:09 PM
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ddevil
Joined: Jul 24, 2007
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Location: Stowing away in Daron's spaceship with a box of Oreos and water.
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Well....good point! But fanfiction is usually written with the characters in character and in the same realistic universe. Like...in your story, Daron is a whore and Serj drives a crappy pick up (I'm sorry, I just can't get over that  ) but in real life, that's not true. Erm, as far as we know. Daron did say he was a prostitute once...but still! Okay. need a new example. Um...in Rike's slash with Serj and Daron, it was based around the time of their last concert together and the Daron and Serj were portrayed IC (In Character). AU will usually have the people OC (Out of Character) and in totally different situations than their real life. AU can be so extreme as to the point where Serj is a vampire leader of a gang and Shavo and Daron are brothers and his vampire minions and he chooses John to take his throne if he dies. That's a serious AU right there. |
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Posted: Jun 19, 2008 - 10:36 PM
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Dart
Joined: Dec 08, 2007
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And Daron is a werebeaver. OK. So you'd say that Serj being fucked by Trent Reznor is in character? (with Trent, yeah)
Looking at early vids ('97-'9 Serj and pickup don't annul each other imo.  |
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