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Posted: Jul 13, 2008 - 09:09 PM
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Spider
Joined: Apr 23, 2008
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| Honestly... I really, really liked this chapter. I liked that you didn't sugarcoat his childhood, but instead went for realism, which is DEFINITELY there. Which is why I love it so damn much. And besides, you put both Serj and Daron in a whole new light for me in this story. Most people know I despise Daron, but I actually really like the Daron in this story. |
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Posted: Jul 13, 2008 - 09:36 PM
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Dart
Joined: Dec 08, 2007
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Location: Shooting up your world
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 Thanx, Steven *bows*
Now I might start believing I'm a writer 
Uhm, why do you despise Daron If I can ask?  |
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Thanx Elyyyyy!
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Posted: Jul 13, 2008 - 10:48 PM
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Dart
Joined: Feb 26, 2007
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Location: Here not there
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| Yes Silvia you should be very proud, while I found this quite a hard chapter to read it was nevertheless a great, absorbing piece which (as Jizzlobber sorta said) given the subject you didn't shy away from. |
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Posted: Jul 14, 2008 - 08:58 PM
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Awesome chapter. Depressing, sure. But very deep, very realistic, very moving.
I epecially loved this line: "This boy was unlike any other person he'd ever met. Sweet and violent, fragile yet tough, cynical but still innocent in his own way..."
It really fits Daron, doesn't it? This isn't so much an AU as a twisted and exaggerated (and gay  ) version of a weird possibility of how they met and formed the band.
Coulda' happened!
(except for the gay part. )
And once again, I/we are "dying of anticipation".
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Posted: Jul 14, 2008 - 09:30 PM
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Dart
Joined: Dec 08, 2007
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TY, Lin. You got it right - this is exactly what I wanted to write, "a twisted and exaggerated and gay version...etc., etc."
Hehe, that line's been the most difficult to write - not for the language of course - because that's how I basically see Daron and I was kinda scared of letting it out so openly. |
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Thanx Elyyyyy!
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Posted: Jul 14, 2008 - 10:44 PM
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Joined: Jul 24, 2007
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Location: Stowing away in Daron's spaceship with a box of Oreos and water.
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Steven approves of Daron in this  Well slap me thrice and hand me to me momma  |
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Posted: Jul 15, 2008 - 12:08 AM
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Yea! I finally read this. I started to read it before and thought it was interesting, then I didn't have time to finish...but now, I've finished. I'm a little more happy that I know some spanish, I understood most of it.
Poor Daron. Though he reminds me a lot of my own made up characters in this story. WHich makes me glad, because part of the deep parts of this also reminds me of my own story...(despite it being a fantasy story), somewhere it in, (my stories are too long). I like how you two put some meaning in a slash story, which isn't really common.
Anyway, Good job Syliva(or is it spelled Silvia) and Silke. |
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 <--Made it on Paint. The words won't mean anything to you, I don't think, but it's the eye of my second favorite character from my story...
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Posted: Jul 15, 2008 - 07:23 AM
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Joined: Dec 19, 2007
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Location: deep down in my own world
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surprising to read that Steven likes Daron in this part... proves again that Silvia did a great job with this part
You gotta wait a couple of days for mine, though... its gonna be a little less depressing but more romantic and sweet  and of course hot, hehe |
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Posted: Jul 17, 2008 - 10:37 AM
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Joined: Jul 06, 2008
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Location: On a thin line between reality and insanity
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| Silvia, I just got around to reading this and I must say that being on this forum...well, you guys have turned me into a slash fan! Serj/Daron is a very hot (thank Lin for the video althought it was hard to take my eye off John long enough to see what was happening.LOL) The interaction between characters, the flashbacks, and the way you "paint" the scene are wonderful. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
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Posted: Jul 17, 2008 - 06:14 PM
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Posted: Jul 17, 2008 - 06:43 PM
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Cigaro
Joined: Oct 04, 2007
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Location: Europe for 13 months still, ie over 5000 miles from Hollywood
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Hopefully next part is long and hot and doesn't make me see dream about raping statue...
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