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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 06:01 AM
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tell me, do these two look proportionate? HELP MEH. critique me, then i'll finish it... i might finish it anyway, without you people telling me how terrible it looks 
is it illegal that i posted this with the guy's butt uncensored? THEY AIN'T DOIN IT.
if ya want, you can say it's shavo, but his beard is hidden. but whatever, i din' think him through.
 <--- i love this 'lil guy.
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 06:13 AM
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Cigaro
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IT LOOKS TERRIBLE!!!!
Kidding, it looks good and proportional. 
And i like the face to the right "naked!"  |
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 06:18 AM
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yeah me too
it seems proportional to me , but what's so unproportional to you ?
cause it seems alright ? |
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 06:22 AM
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haha, i dunno. i have a tendency to make some body parts larger than they need to be *heads, legs, hands*
i forgot i left the little face beside them... o well. |
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 04:12 PM
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Cigaro
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isaid wrote:
i forgot i left the little face beside them... o well.
LEAVE IT! It brings humor. |
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 04:19 PM
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i have a tendency to make some body parts larger than they need to be
oh?
it looks proportianal, also... butts are ok. i think worse has been posted |
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 05:07 PM
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| haha, yea, i have seen worse, so i wasn't too scared. believe it or not, this is my first time to draw a comepletely naked person. i usually cut off just when it gets to the stuff. |
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 05:39 PM
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It looks fine.
Perhaps you could make the girl's arms a bit.. Bigger?
They seem too skinny.  |
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 05:44 PM
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| yeas. they are too thin. the guys feet are messed up too. FIXIN' TIME. |
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 05:49 PM
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Ego Brain
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The feet actually look okay to me.
I was more concerned with the legs - they look a tad.. Unnatural. |
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