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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 06:15 PM
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Ego Brain
Joined: May 03, 2006
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Location: Michigan
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 06:31 PM
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Almost Member
Joined: Apr 04, 2008
Posts: 91
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| haha, WOO!!!! that makes it simpler to see what you mean. i fixed her arm, i might try straightening out her leg so it's not curled, and i'll pull the guys left leg under the right one. of course i say that, i might do something different. |
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Reach for the clouds because the stars skipped out.
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 06:33 PM
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Ego Brain
Joined: May 03, 2006
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Location: Michigan
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Glad I could help. 
Another suggestion would be to shade just a little bit, but that's all up to you  |
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Posted: Jul 09, 2008 - 06:36 PM
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Joined: Apr 04, 2008
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| yea, i was going to do that after i got it fixed. lets see if i can... |
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Posted: Jul 10, 2008 - 02:15 AM
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Spider
Joined: Mar 07, 2008
Posts: 411
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lol. yea the little face is funny. i'd leave it.
you did a really good job tho, it's a good drawing.
the only thing i would point out are the legs and feet.
cuz shavo is tall and he'd have longer legs and bigger feet. |
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Posted: Jul 10, 2008 - 03:38 AM
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Peephole
Joined: Jul 24, 2007
Posts: 1603
Location: Stowing away in Daron's spaceship with a box of Oreos and water
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| Everything looks fine to me. I know all about unproportional body parts. Holy jeez, I shall never get past drawing busts of people for that main reason. Dude, you did a shamazing job here |
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Steven's (Jizzlobber) avi makes me 
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Posted: Jul 10, 2008 - 04:07 AM
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haha, thanks. eh, i'm going to say it's not shavo so i don't have to make his legs longer. and i wouldn't know who the chick was that he was slobberin' on. so it is two random people making out whilst naked.
and the face shall stay! cuz i can't think of what to make the background look like... bah. that way i wont have to color them either!! i'm a winner! i wish... 
BUT! i'm nearly done touching them up. they will look much cleaner... maybe. |
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Posted: Jul 10, 2008 - 04:16 AM
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Peephole
Joined: Jul 24, 2007
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Location: Stowing away in Daron's spaceship with a box of Oreos and water
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| Make the backgorund a forest. That would be pretty, for lack of a better term. |
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Posted: Jul 10, 2008 - 04:36 AM
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| hehe it would be pretty. O! bwaha, ideas might flow a bit faster.... merherherrrrrrrrrr |
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Posted: Jul 18, 2008 - 07:48 AM
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Almost Member
Joined: Apr 04, 2008
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*forgive me I know you guys hate double posts even though it really doesn't matter because this one isn't a popular thread*
the finished product is on my deviantart. I don't much care for it, but I was tired of these guys doing nothing. |
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