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Posted: Jul 12, 2008 - 07:14 PM
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This is my first fan-fic so be gentle. More to come
LIGHTS, CAMERA…ACTION!!
“Ok, let’s set it up again.” Shavo called out to his crew. Instantly, the set crew went into action as Shavo walked up to his leading lady and wrapped her in a blanket. “You hangin’ in there, Angie?” Angie shivered and was very thankful for the break. “I hate you, you know” she teased. The abandoned mental hospital where they were shooting didn’t offer much solace against the winter wind and the fact that Angie was soaking wet didn’t help either. She watched the scene they just shot on the small monitor and was really impressed with Shavo’s vision; the angles and lighting were perfect. She knew the horror movie wasn’t going to win any Oscars but was definitely on par with the likes of Tobe Hooper and George A. Romero.
Suddenly there was a large wooden crack and screams came from the far section of the building. “What the fuck?!?” Shavo shouted as he ripped off his headphones and ran over to the noise. The others followed close behind. Dan, the actor playing Roper, the lead antagonist, had fallen through the floor, his limp body posed like a doll that was haplessly discarded. The EMT on set climbed down and checked Dan’s vitals; he was alive but needed to get to the hospital immediately. As the ambulance pulled away, Shavo decided to call it a day. Annoyance filled the young director because this was really going to fuck with his schedule however he did hope Dan would be alright. They only had this location for a few weeks because it was scheduled for demolition. Shavo had to really pull some strings to get this place, it was perfect for the essence of the film and now they were going to lose it.
Later that night, Angie passed Shavo’s trailer as she overheard him talking with his assistant, Benjamin. “What the hell was he doing over there?” Shavo said, “The place was sectioned off because the floorboards were weak so…” Angie knocked and came in. “Any word about Dan?” she asked. Shavo took a long drag of his cigarette and exhaled as if he was blowing out all the frustration. “Yeah,” he sighed, “he’ll be ok but it’s going to be weeks before he can walk. He broke 3 vertebrae and both legs.” Angie whispered a ‘thanks’ to the heavens but the reality set in: what about the movie? She panicked. This was her only job and the thought of going back on unemployment really upset her since she was already behind in her bills. “So what happens now?” Ben broke in as if reading Angie’s thoughts. Angie looked a Shavo for an answer, the lights amplifying the dark circles under his eyes and pallor of his skin. Suddenly Angie had an idea. “You can do it!” she said without realizing she was being audible. “Shavo, you would be perfect for Roper!” “So, you’re a casting director now, Ang?” he chided but then thought about it. Reluctantly and after much encouragement from Angie and Ben, he accepted.
After working 16 hours every day for two weeks, the movie was back on schedule. The call sheet for today was the “love scene” between ‘Rachel’ and ‘Roper’. Angie was being ‘tied down’ to the bed and was almost ready to start the scene. Shavo climbed on top of her and called ‘Action’. The two exchanged dialogue and at the right moment, “Rachel” kissed her adversary. Angie felt an explosion go off in her brain; Shavo’s lips were so soft as her tongue probed his mouth. Shavo returned the kiss with equal fervor. The two didn’t hear Adam, the assistant director, say “cut” as they continued the ‘scene’. Adam said louder, “uh, guys…cut.” Shavo smiled, “Oh, sorry” Angie returned the smile and blushed a little.
Angie didn’t realize how completely exhausted she was until after her shower. She lit some candles, put on her terry cloth robe, wrapped her long, chestnut-colored hair in a towel and lay across her bed. She heard a small knock on her door but Angie was too tired to get up. “Come in” she called. “Angie?” she heard Shavo call. She sat up, feeling a sudden rush of adrenaline. “In here” she called back. He emerged in the doorway, the glow from the candles made him look…primal. Angie felt a surge of heat in her groin. “Hey” he said as he walked in and stood at the end of the bed. “Hi” she replied as she pulled herself up into a sitting position. “Are you doing ok? I mean, we could possibly take a couple days for a break if you feel you need it.” Angie noticed he wasn’t looking at her as he talked to her.
She went to the edge of the bed and balanced herself on her knees so she was face-to-face with him. She placed a finger over his lips and said, “You didn’t come here to talk about taking a break…you came here to talk about this...” She gently kissed him. Shavo sighed and his body relaxed as he welcomed her tongue in his mouth. Angie pulled him onto the bed and wrapped her naked thighs around Shavo’s waist. He grabbed her fleshy ass as Angie pulled open her robe. Hands fumbled on his pants as their passion consumed them. Finally his cock was free and he entered her with one thrust; both let a loud moan as they found their rhythm. They kissed again as moved at a faster rate.
“Oh……God….!” Angie screamed as wave after wave of climax washed over her. Shavo wasn’t too far behind as he felt her tighten around his shaft; he threw is head back, came in her and collapsed on top of her. They held each other as they slowly came back down to Earth. Shavo lifted his head up and planted little kisses over Angie’s face. Then he looked at her and said, “Do you think we should write that into the movie?” They both burst out in laughter.
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Posted: Jul 12, 2008 - 07:28 PM
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Dart
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Great story, not many have really written about Shavo either...I also like the way you took it from his film interest rather than his musical interest.
I look forward to your other works.  |
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Posted: Jul 12, 2008 - 07:37 PM
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| Thanks. I'm really glad you liked it. |
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Posted: Jul 12, 2008 - 07:48 PM
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that's really good, well written, too
I like it^^ |
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Posted: Jul 12, 2008 - 07:50 PM
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| Thank you. I just finished the one for John so all you John Whores get ready! |
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Posted: Jul 12, 2008 - 08:20 PM
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You know I'm excited. 
I really liked this one too. It was very well-written and very original. |
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Posted: Jul 12, 2008 - 09:12 PM
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Posted: Jul 13, 2008 - 08:44 PM
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Posted: Jul 14, 2008 - 02:17 AM
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| Well, this was my first attempt after being on hiatus for some time...maybe I could edit some parts to increase the story line or make another chapter. |
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Posted: Jul 14, 2008 - 06:47 AM
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Joined: Dec 12, 2006
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You should make another chapter!!
I really liked it but I agree with Dika, it moves too fast for me 
I want more details  |
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