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Posted: Feb 10, 2004 - 07:09 AM
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Hypnotized
Joined: Nov 18, 2003
Posts: 7385
Location: SOAD LAND!!
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help me out on the spelling...its bad sorry.
Vicious circle
Weary waters in the threatening calm,
with ambivalent voices stained the wept
dull eyes reflect with envy and awe
tired lips they tremble driest kept
Quaff from the chalice of pain to nurish,
spills threw her arduous life
wishing to rest her head abreast the past
a prodigy to the knife
A bilateral reflector she stands before
the moon upon its crest
she has fallen solo
the bird has built its nest
A rush of death chases
torn from a self-inflicted disease
a tight rope to balance on
for eveyone to please
Tramatized hands
effloresed the evidence across her face
spills threw her porcalyn body, fresh blood
white roses in a vase
Pleading from freedom like prayers to a god
enjoying the enlightment drain away
not to glorify ones commitment to struggle
but to glority ones life to pay
signals settle on their noble brow
embracing anguish, embellish sin
but no one has ever seen herself the way she has
the vicious circle within
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Posted: Feb 10, 2004 - 08:32 AM
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ddevil
Joined: Nov 12, 2003
Posts: 1381
Location: NL
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wow this one was amazing rain! This was absolutely fabulous! I loved it! And you were saying that you wanted to burn your poetry after you read mine....pshhh girl, this is absolute quality that I can't beat!  |
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Posted: Feb 10, 2004 - 10:06 PM
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Hypnotized
Joined: Nov 18, 2003
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Location: SOAD LAND!!
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 thank you...its been a month since i've written anything and i'm glad that you enjoyed it. my only goal is to entertain threw my writting and if i have accomplished that, then my purpose and love for writting has increased my motivation for creating more. thanks |
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Posted: Feb 11, 2004 - 05:45 AM
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ddevil
Joined: Nov 12, 2003
Posts: 1381
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| glad I could motivate you |
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