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Posted: Feb 16, 2004 - 09:28 PM
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Hypnotized
Joined: Nov 18, 2003
Posts: 7385
Location: SOAD LAND!!
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Bird up influenced me, so did the movie Chicago.
Silent in the limelight,
threw all the hazy smoke
hints of revenge graced her eyes.
Yet, the puppet speaks not with her words
the menacing strings inwhich attach
pull her veins in great indescretion.
Painted with shimmer and rouge,
jazz begins to play backup for her bitterness
martini's are sipped to this seduction.
Round midnight,
appearing off stage
feminine ignorance flirts with scandal,
scandal of expression threw secret love affairs
Murder mysteries are left in unsolved in denied vampy motel rooms.
Her loves invitation to the world of hurt,
was gracefully sipped with the worlds finest champaigne.
This rainy night was spent with half eaten chocolates, and
tainted cherries residing next to the bed.
Smeared red lipstick and empty bullet caps reflect sinful pasts.
The last call for booze left her with perhaps nothing but,
her dead man,
the elegant moon
and hopes for a new stage act
Sometimes i feel its lacking rhythm or something...tell me what you think.. |
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Posted: Feb 17, 2004 - 07:30 PM
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Spider
Joined: Jan 04, 2004
Posts: 545
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very nice, I love it. I still haven't seen the movie Chicago!! ahhh!!
I'm going to watch it this weekend though , yay! it looks really good. |
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Posted: Feb 17, 2004 - 07:36 PM
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ddevil
Joined: Nov 12, 2003
Posts: 1381
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| Wow Rain this is amazing my lil sis! man this poetry is good! I'm telling ya....you have a real talent.... |
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Posted: Feb 17, 2004 - 09:31 PM
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Hypnotized
Joined: Nov 18, 2003
Posts: 7385
Location: SOAD LAND!!
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| Thank you to all...i hope your saying that because you mean it... |
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Posted: Feb 17, 2004 - 11:19 PM
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Joined: Jan 27, 2004
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Posted: Feb 18, 2004 - 05:31 PM
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ddevil
Joined: Nov 12, 2003
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of course I meant it otherwise I wouldn't be saying it silly  you write good stuff, don't doubt that! |
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