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Posted: Oct 07, 2005 - 04:52 PM
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Needle
Joined: Aug 29, 2005
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No place, to run, no place to hide,
six days gone by, where is my pride?
It's not the deam i wish to have,
my self-indulgence becomes my bad.
Sit in silence or face the blame?
Another day without the shame,
become two-faced, thats not my style,
this fucking house, this life, this pain!
Are you the one to get me through,
this time where that love just chases after you.
Let me be the one i want,
your deceit, your lies, there is too much insde!
I won't tell you what it is about so you can have your own interpretation. It's not very good, it's just quite personal to me!
Let me know what yout think... |
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Posted: Oct 07, 2005 - 06:42 PM
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Member
Joined: Sep 20, 2005
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| Very good. Sounds very depressing, but it doesn't change the fact that it is good. |
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Posted: Oct 08, 2005 - 03:59 AM
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ddevil
Joined: Jun 06, 2005
Posts: 1163
Location: on the side of the freeway in the car
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nah, darontotallyrocks, your name i should give you is youtotallyrock
that was poem was very good,
keep it up! |
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Posted: Oct 08, 2005 - 12:36 PM
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Needle
Joined: Aug 29, 2005
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Thanks guys, your very sweet mathias, but it should stay as darontotallyrocks (no explanation needed).  |
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Posted: Oct 08, 2005 - 03:16 PM
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Needle
Joined: Sep 10, 2005
Posts: 3666
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Cool poem.  |
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Posted: Oct 08, 2005 - 03:36 PM
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Ego Brain
Joined: Jun 05, 2005
Posts: 685
Location: Olshtyn;-) Poland
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Wow It's great and I totally agree with Mathias.....  |
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Posted: Oct 08, 2005 - 05:58 PM
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Needle
Joined: Aug 29, 2005
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| Awww too Varteni! Your an amazing artist! |
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Posted: Oct 08, 2005 - 07:29 PM
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Ego Brain
Joined: Jun 05, 2005
Posts: 685
Location: Olshtyn;-) Poland
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omg Thanks  |
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Posted: Oct 08, 2005 - 08:46 PM
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Needle
Joined: Aug 29, 2005
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| Your welcome! Everyone deserves praise! |
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Posted: Dec 23, 2005 - 12:22 PM
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Dart
Joined: Jun 08, 2005
Posts: 950
Location: Jamming out on guitar with John Frusciante and Flea
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OMG i did not know that you have posted a poem!
oh god im so dumb! * hits heads * ow that actually hurt 
anyway great stuff Melissa!
and yep Varteni your a great artist!
Matt |
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Posted: Dec 26, 2005 - 04:54 PM
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Peephole
Joined: Jun 21, 2005
Posts: 1830
Location: In Daron's Skeletal Dwelling
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| omg...i didnt know either....the poem is fucking amazing....as always...YOU RULE!!!!!!! |
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